Sunset Poem by Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Sunset

Rating: 5.0


The sun setting
The man in a haste.
But his pace slow.

Sunday, November 4, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life,old age
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 05 November 2018

Akham, such a marvelous poem.....10+++++++++++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 November 2018

Old age is like sunset. Though man is in haste yet his pace is slow. A beautiful philosophical poem executed concisely. Thank you dear Akham for sharing this poem.10

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Tom Allport 08 November 2018

Everything slows then stops we are no different? .......well penned Akham

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 November 2018

An excellent three liner! Pragmatic expression.......10

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Susan Williams 05 November 2018

Excellent topic and handling of it! ! ! ! 10+++++++++

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 November 2018

Taste of life! Man in a haste! ! Not to waste time; With the paste of the truth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 November 2018

the sunset is a must as much as is its rising somewhere else all is cyclic

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