Sunrise Poem by Indira Renganathan

Sunrise

Rating: 5.0


When the pregnant night breaks open its vent with few drizzles
when the grey stretch elasticizes itself with a pinkish rift
There, the celestial babe with his fulgent face facing earth born
Exulted earth exalts his every rise from aqua, and hill
Sprawling a roll-on blanket of gold giving earth a big embrace

Friday, February 1, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,sun
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 02 February 2019

Perfect divine imagery. Thanks for sharing

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Kesav Easwaran 02 February 2019

Perfect divine imagery. Much creative.Thanks for sharing

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 February 2019

The very phrase, 'Pregnant night' is a wonderful contemplation! A beautiful poem dear madam.....10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 February 2019

A beautiful poem that captures the wonders of nature., We can see what you see, Indira. Superb imagery.

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 February 2019

When the pregnant night breaks open its vent.. such a fine poem.. very first verse catches the attention. thank u dear poetess. tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 May 2021

Sprawling a roll-on blanket of gold giving earth a big embrace......touching concluding. Beautiful poem Five stars.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 February 2021

Exulted earth exalts his every rise from aqua, and hill Sprawling a roll-on blanket of gold giving earth a big embrace...great!

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Mahtab Bangalee 02 December 2019

Sprawling a roll-on blanket of gold giving earth a big embrace // superb imagery excellently delineated the scenery moment of rising sun

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Valsa George 02 February 2019

Beautiful comparison! The 'pregnant night', fulgent face', 'blanket of gold'..... a series of beautiful images and phrases! A 10

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M Asim Nehal 02 February 2019

Articulate poem with great metaphor and imageries.10+++

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