Songs Of Life (Tanka)- 09 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Songs Of Life (Tanka)- 09

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In the hues of midnight
You glitter as the flickering fireflies glow.
Bees on shy flowers cite-
adore your beauty in theirsongs humming-low,
moonshine and raindrops embellish your skin glow.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 11 April 2018

Such a beauty depicted in this tanka.Simply excellent!

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Thanks dear Sir for so beautifully written remarks, that made my day.R Regards. Subhas

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Prativa Rani 01 December 2020

Beautiful poem Sir. Loved the lines Bees on shy flowers cite- adore your beauty in theirsongs humming-low, 10 out of 10 for it.

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Sabita Sahoo 30 June 2018

Bees on shy flowers cite- adore your beauty in their songs humming-low, moonshine and raindrops embellish your skin glow. So lovely composition dear poet, wish to read it million times. 10++

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Prativa Rani 10 June 2018

Excellent painting of nocturnal beauty sir, did she sleep then?

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Soumyaranjan Mohanty 23 April 2018

Beautiful poem sir.Thanks for sharing with us.

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Thanks dear Soumya for the beautiful remarks rendered.

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Susan Williams 12 April 2018

Beautiful words for the one you love and paint in such endearing phrases. 10++++++++++++

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Thanks dear friend Susan for the beautiful words of encouragement.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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