Song Of Optimism Poem by Sankar Sarkar

Song Of Optimism

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Pair of hopeless hands
Getting optimistic every moment
Beyond realistic taste;
New born being
Sprung from the womb
Reciprocating to the modernity,
Life breathes like bubble
Being anchored pair of legs
Into desire of the earth,
Two eyes glowing to hold
The fallen star; don’t know
Where and how its roots
Sprawled fathomless,
And inspired to walk eternally.
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Friday, June 12, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amitava Sur 05 December 2015

Knowing the limit to strive for unlimited in a positive manner itself is optmism, what is a tell story of a human life. Enjoyed reading.

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The poet has his own views in original about the life and it is a magnificent and best of idea and the sentence those attracted very much life breath likes bubble and the fallen start don't know which I consider as a best of imagination in the poetic mind.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 13 June 2015

We are anchored by gravity.... what pulls the falling star?

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Raymond Farrell 12 June 2015

This is a multi-layered look at optimism dealing with universal themes in a hopeful manner. It is an encouragement to keep trying and moving forward.

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