Soldier Poem by Dr Dillip K Swain

Soldier

Rating: 4.9


The titanic war caused horror,
The enemy melted in fear,
The young soldier after victory,
Packed his baggage in hurry.

His mother muttered in death bed,
The triumph siren she overheard,
She couldn't see the brave soldier again,
She closed her eyes in mortal pain.

The soldier arrived a bit later,
Couldn't give her a drop of water,
She had left a letter for her son,
Only desired her son to open.

The soldier opened the letter in tear,
A patriotic verse was drafted clear.

Copyright @ Poet,26 January,2023

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 29 January 2023

a tender poem of love during the midst of bloodshed, fear, and human disaster---5 stars of course

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Anjandev Roy 29 January 2023

Simply brilliant..... enjoyed thoroughly.......thank u, sir......

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 30 January 2023

one of the best anti-war poem I have read Bravo!

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Indira Renganathan 31 January 2023

marvelous and majestic like the soldier's mother...an honourable write

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Rob Lamberton 21 February 2023

A soldier sacrifices in many ways! So does a mother!

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Rob Lamberton 07 February 2024

There is something about having a military son that calls out patriotism!

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Indira Renganathan 25 May 2023

An excellent poem that makes me read again and again...the bonding between the soldier and his mother...you have crafted an extraordinary poem...kudos Dillip...and thanks for all your comments

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 23 April 2023

A melancholy and beautiful tale of death, sacrifice and love.5 stars full.

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A great patriotic sacrifice was it to let her son serve in the forces. However she died in peace and full satisfaction

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M.J. Lemon 22 February 2023

There are so many notes of sadness in this verse. I keep thinking of loss in victory--an outcome in battles in any form, real and metaphorical. Brilliant, Dillip!

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