Senryu - Life Boat Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - Life Boat

Rating: 5.0


a drifting life boat
merily floats in river
In storm, calm weather

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 06 September 2020

In between calm and stormy weather boa of life floats gently move ahead with amazing beauty and realization. An amazing poem is excellently penned...10

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Aarzoo Mehek 06 September 2020

This is how life sums up for all of us. It keeps drifting on the waters of time. Nice Senryu.10++

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Deepak S S 10 September 2020

Yes moving on is the mul mantra of life.

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Kostas Lagos 07 September 2020

No matter the circumstances, life goes on...excellent

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Mahtab Bangalee 07 September 2020

On this earth the life boat- the unstable mind rowing on the confusion flowing!

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Varsha M 06 September 2020

Progression matters most Rest all takes care of itself.... beautiful sir.

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Anjandev Roy 06 September 2020

In storm, calm weather...........significant......thank u, dear poet.....anjandev roy.

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