Seascape Poem by Tom Billsborough

Seascape

Rating: 2.8


My spirit self wakes to the sound of the sea
As each wave breaks out from its long sleep
In cathartic music.
Drum beats echo my embryonic state and the foam scatters
Like disconnected thoughts.
Rocks crouch like satyrs in dark corners,
Issuing collusive whispers.
Persistent Vespers on the rolling tide.
I hear you now, creator of all things, the one true God,
Calling me from your vast womb,
To sing my anthems to your female glory
Within this cathedral of true shape
Fitting as the crab's carapace.

Saturday, June 18, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: sea
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 14 February 2017

Wow....! I wonder why no one has so far commented on this poem! In the roar of waves, you identify the call of God inviting you to sing anthems in His Cathedral.... From the beginning to the end you have stuck to the seascape! You identify yourself as an embryo still under formation!

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Tom Billsborough 15 February 2017

Actually it is one I like myself. It is a type of hymn as you have correctly understood it. The last line is an allusion to a French poem by Francis Ponge, which echos my embryo image. Ponge's carapace refers to the economy needed to create poetry. a view I endorse. Thank you for your comment, Valsa.

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