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P.A. NOUSHAD (SHOMSI)

P.A. NOUSHAD (SHOMSI)

PATHIRIPPATTA - po, KANDOTHKUNI, Kakkattil-via, Kozhikode, Kerala, India

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Rating: 4.8


I visit doctor
for myself and my family
to clean the illness out,
I clean my nail, hair and body,
I sweep my table, room, house...
and spider webs
inside my head
until I am cleaned into dust.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abha Sharma 09 May 2008

what ever arouses the feelings through its beauty and affection...is a poem, a nice gesture.. **Abha**

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Fay Slimm 14 August 2008

This is a statement of truth, written with much appeal. Well Done. Greetings from Cornwall U, K.

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Bob Blackwell 10 November 2008

Life is not to be wasted, we should enjoy each moment. Each dawn a challenge to live this day to its fullest. This is a poem to remind us all of this. Bob

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Suresh Kumar Ek 14 October 2020

To clean iside Makes the difference

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Terry Dawson 02 October 2015

I have absolutely no idea what this means. You have befuddled me completely - well done!

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Deependra Kumar Jha 03 December 2009

a wonderful write! loved the way you write 'poem'. a 10

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Obinna Eruchie 05 June 2009

a blissful way of saying a beautiful poem is like a wonderful life. jolly writing.

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Ramesh T A 04 April 2009

Your poem gives the thrilling sensation of the story of a novel called life!

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P.A. NOUSHAD (SHOMSI)

P.A. NOUSHAD (SHOMSI)

PATHIRIPPATTA - po, KANDOTHKUNI, Kakkattil-via, Kozhikode, Kerala, India
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