Life Poem by P.A. NOUSHAD (SHOMSI)
Life
Ripples form,
widen,
disappear,
I like to use the word 'merge'
instead of 'disappear',
then evaporate,
being rain, mist, snow,
pat the earth
and ripples form again
in the same ocean.
Your poems have roots deep down somewhere. This one is simply fantastic. Thanks.
This is a great poem with strong metaphors. Keep writing, good work.
I see the repeating patterns of life and of nature. What was it you saw that made you to write thus?
Finish is fantastic… I see the stars/descending into the ocean/in silence. Thanks for sharing Voted 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK
Great Poem... i was expectin some thing....when i read the title silence... but u got a great angle there... keep them comin peace
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 8:36:31 PM # 1.0.0.1119
great style of writing.