Saree And Thorns Poem by Ibnu Din Assingkiri

Saree And Thorns



If saree caught on a thorns
even gentle pull is damaging
hard snap will ripped apart.

O precious gems from Adam's Rib,
guard your thin sheet saree
keep out from the sharp spines

Saree is the crown of yours
If caught on thorns, what will damage,
the thorns or the saree?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
blank blank 08 April 2011

interesting which will be damaged? the thorns or the saree?

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 30 March 2011

It is really a great poem having a lot of wisdom and depth. You have come out with the truth of human life. It's really a thought provoking write. Thanks for sharing...

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 30 March 2011

It was really a very good observation. You have described the truth in fewer words. No need to write a book on it. An extremely thought provoking write. Thanks for sharing...

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Malaya Roses 30 March 2011

Very effective words being used in this poem with multicultural understanding. Well done, my friend.

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Ibnu Din Assingkiri

Ibnu Din Assingkiri

Singkir Laut, Kedah, Malaysia
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