Rise Poem by Bhartesh Kaushik

Rise

Rating: 5.0


To the mountains touching clouds,
a staircase I'm making on.
Blood, tear, bruises
and sour water I'm drinking on.
Push me down, pull me deeper,
I have started liking pain.
The throne is already mine,
for I'll make blessings rain.

Wednesday, October 3, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: hardship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 19 October 2018

The throne is already mine, for which I'll make blessings rain... my staircase to the mountains near clouds....... a very fine imagination. and determination.. thank u. tony

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Ntsako Manhisa 03 October 2018

Courage and endurance goes hand in hand that's what this learn from this poem. 10++++++ The throne is already mine, for which I'll make blessings rain.

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