Redolent Poem by Adiela Akoo

Redolent

Rating: 5.0


Curtain of night

pinned with stars

crickets serenading a dancing breeze



Water wafting wilfully

on slime-smoothed stones

singing songs of appease



A lilting song

picking pirouetting petals

from fragrant frangipani trees



Intoxicated spirit

quietly redolent of the Highest Call

Enamoured Soul on its knees!

Tuesday, November 20, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,nature,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 17 December 2018

spirit intoxicated, enamored soul. very nice poetic expressions and the selection of words.. thank u dear poetess. tony

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Adiela Akoo 12 April 2019

Thank you very much :)

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Bharati Nayak 01 December 2018

Curtain of night pinned with stars crickets serenading a dancing breeze ​ Water wafting wilfully on slime-smoothed stones singing songs of appease - - - - Nature's beauty finds amazing expression in this poem.

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Adiela Akoo 03 December 2018

Thank you :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 November 2018

Intoxicated spirit! ! With the muse of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Adiela Akoo 29 November 2018

Glad you liked it

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Butch Decatoria 27 November 2018

Beautiful. Wonderful view, observations from your perspective—uniquely only yours. Well written. Bravo.

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Adiela Akoo 28 November 2018

Thank you. Much appreciated

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 November 2018

Curtain of night pinned with stars.. songs, intoxicated spirit, . expressions of life.. you have powerful observation and imagination. thank u dear poetess. tony

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Adiela Akoo 26 November 2018

Thank you, Tony, for your kind comments

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