Promising Dawn Is Sure To Shine! Poem by Ramesh T A

Promising Dawn Is Sure To Shine!

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What a freshness and freedom the green fields and pasture
Nature offers in abundance to breathe new air after all
Works of vital interest have been finished before sunset!

Like the cattle and birds going to the stable and nest
A feeling of fulfilment it gives to breathe free air at
The day's end welcoming at last the night with coolness!

Night is the time to count the countless Stars shining in
The Sky forgetting all woes of the world affecting all
And disturbing the cool minds like the covid19 does now!

Many an upheaval the world has seen so far and yet ever
Remains so calm as the surface of sea as I see walking
Along the shore of beach full of pure and fresh wind now!

The freedom we have forgotten in our worries passing,
Nature offers as usual sans any panic the public fails
To see, realize and understand to wait and watch for
The promising dawn sure to shine tomorrow damn sure..!

Friday, March 20, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 20 March 2020

and watch for The promising dawn sure to shine tomorrow sure..! ... Yes indeed, nature survives triumphant amidst all calamities. We must draw inspiration from it in dire times. Beautiful.

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 20 March 2020

Green fields motivate mind with greater dignity. Green trees, grass, shrubs and herbs preserve medicinal values for us. We feel certainty and we feel dignity of hope and beauty. Dawn brings promising features for us. Dawn carries fresh air and fresh tune of God. Countless stars giggle observing the beauty of dawn saying good by as morning arrives. The poet is definitely a true nature lover.

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Ramesh T A

Ramesh T A

Madurai, Tamil Nadu, India
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