Prick Me Not Poem by SALINI NAIR

Prick Me Not

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She was smiling in my front
Like a queen of that dawn
All allure in its charm
Its heart was filled with love
There the flies suck its sweetness
Gaze around as enchantress
Charm that set all eyes on her
She swing around in solitude
Envious mind prick it at once
Take it with a lazy mind
Smell it for awhile and threw
There the dullness was evident
In the mud it breathe at last
May swing for a long time ahead
May feed some in that time
But the brutality stopped it forever! ! ! !

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.

Sunday, August 31, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: flower
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 31 August 2014

A bitter truth of life, we hate violence, but we cannot get rid of it completely.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 31 August 2014

Nice- -seek light amid darkness, seek refuse in day break

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Geetha Jayakumar 01 September 2014

A thoughtful write Salini. I agree with Valsa's comment. This is one fact of life, people use and throw to achieve their selfish means. Today no value for humanity itself. Every day we are witnessing cruelty playing tricks. Loved the way you presented it.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 31 August 2014

Very insightful......the truth has been spelt out here......the innocent who harms no one is subjected to brutality..... very nice.......Salini

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Rajkamal P.j 31 August 2014

May feed some in that time.A contextually meaningful line. Feeding those hungry of nature's beauty apart from pollen and honey eaters.

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Gajanan Mishra 31 August 2014

lovely and beautiful, I like it. thanks,

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Valsa George 31 August 2014

A flower with its sweet smile and scent attracts everyone, but some pinch it or pluck it with thoughtless hands. Some even go to the extend of crushing it! It has its direct relevance to human life also! A poem with deeper layers of meaning, Salini!

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