Potrait Of The Innocents. Poem by surya surya

Potrait Of The Innocents.

Rating: 4.8


i sat up and looked over the vast sea,
huge water body spread over horizon,
like a well mowed British meadow,
in blue sapphire, sharp curves in,
small arcs defining the edges.

suddenly my legs moved, the pace
huge and fast, took met to sea front,
where large waves rushed in menacingly
and crashed short of the silvery shore.

as i wondered, the sea drew back fast,
exposing her belly where i rushed in, fearless
followed by hoards of sea crabs with their long
legs appearing from nowhere, like aliens, and
alas soon tons of water rushed back, soaking me
the soft chill water soothing me body and soul.


as i walked, a young lady moved in
her silhouette defining her petite form
jeans hanging precarious below navel,
trouser pulled up to knee, showing her
lovely little feet chiseled to perfection
in ivory, lovely calf and knee painted pink
and shaded for great visual effect.

she wore soft top, the sea breeze
playing cupid, struck her mild
betraying her lovely frontal form,
when i stood speechless, envying
the lord of creation for the marvel.

as we met she threw a generous smile
her pearly teeth shining in silvery aura
crushed it mild, with a boyish charm, then
quickly held my palm in a tight and warm
hand shake pressing my fragile fingers
the touch chilled and thrilled me instantly
and lowered my age on par with her’s.
=o0o=

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

i like it... very different from others i have read. love the imagery. keep it up.

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Dr. Sonal Chhaya 30 March 2010

Very sensual with wild imagination..lovely Thanks for sharing

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Gul naz 30 March 2010

the scene you have created is so real and the theme you have chosen is very unusual and captivating

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 March 2010

suddenly my legs moved, the pace huge and fast, took met to sea front, where large waves rushed in menacingly and crashed short of the silvery shore.........................it is simply beautiful to express the beauty of sea in words that too synchronising it with deep thoughts.. i admire your skill dear sir.....10 read mine... preference to hate... nudge to marry

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Joseph Poewhit 31 March 2010

Paints the picture well of innocence, with a base setting

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Veena Yadav 10 February 2011

hello Poet, its really a lovely piece penned down. nice to see u aftr a long, do tk time to go through my list 2. tk cr.

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Vinod Kumar 01 May 2010

Very Nice art with the colour of the nature, nice wave also like a Joola thanks for sharing,10+

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Vinod Kumar 01 May 2010

Very Nice art with the colour of the nature, nice wave also like a Joola thanks for sharing,10+

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Hmimi Djamel 15 April 2010

great work. it's one of those moments when poetry meets theatre. wonderfull

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Queeny Gona 14 April 2010

I enjoyed your work.Voted 10

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