Platform Poem by P.A. NOUSHAD (SHOMSI)

P.A. NOUSHAD (SHOMSI)

P.A. NOUSHAD (SHOMSI)

PATHIRIPPATTA - po, KANDOTHKUNI, Kakkattil-via, Kozhikode, Kerala, India

Platform

Rating: 4.8


Platform swarmed with ants
on the floor, chairs, benches...
hearing the announcements of
arrival and departure.
A train draws into the station
keeping the ants under its wings,
ferrying
beyond the rivers, hills, deserts...
the ants are now as one family
under one roof,
dreams and tears melt into a long line
into destiny.

Platform
Monday, September 8, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: art
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello 30 November 2009

This is a Latin epigram. Creating your child is really more complex a little bit. Nevertheless its character is so well described, as well as in every true epigram, that he turns out nice, too.

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Estrella Baldemosa 13 February 2009

true...well done.....

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P.A. NOUSHAD (SHOMSI)

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PATHIRIPPATTA - po, KANDOTHKUNI, Kakkattil-via, Kozhikode, Kerala, India
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