Perfect Love Poem by shrutika kahale
Perfect Love
She wasn't a perfect lady,
ill tempered, with a mind unsteady.
she possessed no ego, neither an attitude,
with no sense of humor and her life almost screwed.
yet people loved her, so did she,
but a guy loved her to infinity.
he never pampered her,
never showed her pictures that were blur,
he never assured to fetch her moon and stars,
never promised to be her Valdemar,
never promised to abandon his life for her,
never assured to be her knight in shinning armor.
all women desired beauty and men,
she didn't desire any of it,
she was just another dumb, yet another insane,
she was herself and quintessential,
she never bothered about others, that's what made her special!
he praised her beauty,
even when she was in pajamas,
And her hair tied up,
even when her eyes were sleepy,
And smudged makeup!
she wasn't a perfect lady,
he wasn't a perfect man,
yet their love was perfect,
which made the whole world their fan!
they loved each other without knowing the meaning of love,
they made a perfect couple on all above!
Sounds like a couple who have got their priorities right! The couple both come alive because of your sensitive and humorous writing. Must read more of your work after this excellent piece. Tom Billsborough
Poet's PagePoemsQuotesCommentsStatsSend MessageShare on FacebookShare on Twitter Poems by shrutika kahale: 5 / 5 « prev. poem Perfect Love - Poem by shrutika kahale She wasn't a perfect lady, ill tempered, with a mind unsteady. she possessed no ego, neither an attitude, with no sense of humor and her life almost screwed. yet people loved her, so did she, but a guy loved her to infinity. he never pampered her, never showed her pictures that were blur, he never assured to fetch her moon and stars, never promised to be her Valdemar, never promised to abandon his life for her, never assured to be her knight in shinning armor. all women desired beauty and men, she didn't desire any of it, she was just another dumb, yet another insane, she was herself and quintessential, she never bothered about others, that's what made her special! A brilliant description of a couple in love.. Very beautiful and touchy...I would love to read it again and again. It deserves 10. Thanks dear poet. Subhas
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5/2/2024 10:01:04 AM # 1.0.0.1119
They loved each other! Thanks for sharing.
yes, thankyou for reading and commenting