Our Love Poem by Sonali Parida

Our Love

Rating: 5.0


My thoughts begins with you,
My songs sing and rhyme with you,
My dreams start and end with you
Each and very word I write is for you.


I don't know
how long would l live
but till my day of death
there is only one thing to think
that's you
you my dear
and that it is you,
Only you
I love you
that's very clear.


I just need one promise
a single promise from you
that if you ever love to come,
come in someday, somewhere
upon any of the dreams,
it must be mine,
only my dream.

I want to see you,
only you
there in my heart,
everywhere there must be
only one thing I see and believe
and love to see
that's you and me
wrapped in arms of each other
and we'd stay like this forever.


One day
when everything would be over,
and everything would be gone,
gone for ever
although we shall be no more,
no more on this earth
the stories of our love
age-old, shall hang
down from the plum tree and
in the dreamy eyes of
sad lily and the moon
hiding behind the clouds
remembering you and me.

Saturday, December 2, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: desire,love,love and art,love and dreams,love and friendship,love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subhas Chandra Chakra 04 December 2017

the stories of our love age-old, shall hang down from the plum tree and in the dreamy eyes of sad lily and the moon hiding behind the clouds remembering you and me. Lovely poem shared dear. Keep it up. 10++++ for the poem.

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Prativa Rani 09 December 2017

the stories of our love age-old, shall hang down from the plum tree and in the dreamy eyes of sad lily and the moon hiding behind the clouds remembering you and me. A quite romantic write Sonali, carry on this flavour. 10

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Chinedu Dike 12 March 2018

Beautiful love poem conveying deep emotions with clarity of thought and mind. Lovely and very passionate rendition elegantly brought forth from the heart. Thanks for sharing Sonali and do remain enriched.

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 16 December 2017

but till my day of death there is only one thing to think your poem is so nice, so well written 10+++++

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Rajendra Rout 13 December 2017

it was a really very beautiful poem sonali.i enjoy your poem.Thanks dear sonali for shairing this poem...10+++++

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Rajendra Rout 13 December 2017

it was a really very beautiful poem sonali.i enjoy your poem.Thanks dear sonali for shairing this poem...10+++++ for it

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 10 December 2017

and that it is you, Only you I love you that's very clear. I just need one promise a single promise from you that if you ever love to come, come in someday, somewhere upon any of the dreams, it must be mine, only my dream. I want to see you, only you there in my heart, everywhere there must be only one thing I see and believe thanks for shearing lovely poem I really enjoy your poem10+++(++++++++

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