One Winter Morning At The Village Road Poem by Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

One Winter Morning At The Village Road

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In the cold winter morning
the village road was quiet.
Ricksaw puller Tolmu was then fast sleeping
on the grass at the roadside
beside his rickshaw
drunk from the country liquor vendor.

Some goats grazing near him,
Cattlesseen at the roadside paddy fields
grazing stubble or standing lazy
bearing the cold.

At about nine
when the sun shone dispelling the cold
people started going on the road
rows of students going on foot to schools.
Tolmu was still sleeping
enjoying the warm sun light.
But nobody looked at him intentionally
for they seen such a sight frequently.
But his neighbor Fatima laughed imperceptibly
In the passing auto rickshaw seeing him.

After sometime he waked up
and soon remembered-
He was to deliver
four bushels of paddy
from the tenant farmer to the landlord
before the latter's going to office.
Yet the time was late.

Thursday, May 5, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,poverty
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

The memory of a village incident beautifully made into the poem

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Unnikrishnan E S 06 May 2016

Akham, Very nostalgic poem- about village and about winter. Yes, in winter, however you hurry, Yet the time was late. Nice poem. Exquisitely phrased to bring out the right mood of nostalgia. Thank you for sharing. A perfect 10 for you. I have posted a poem A Winter in Delhi. can you read and offer comments? Thank you.

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Rajnish Manga 25 October 2018

A very realistic portrayal of a pastoral life during winter mornings. Nicely crafted poem. Thanks, Akham ji.

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Christopher Tye 09 November 2016

Really good poem, Village life can seem like a rural idyll to outsiders but most villages have a high level of poverty and poor public services.

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Kavana D Rajan 26 July 2016

Thanks for sharing the poem Sir. Good one :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 May 2016

Yet the time was late. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Latha Govindasamy 06 May 2016

The poem is too good about the nature in poverty.

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