Once Upon A Home Poem by Bill Cantrell

Once Upon A Home

Rating: 5.0


Once upon a time there was an oasis,
Yes, a home,
where all found refreshing friends
Beautiful palms drank from inkwells
of of inspiration and wonder
Sure, there were trolls as there still is,
But we tolerated their silliness
This oasis was fun and comments were
posted as often as we would give

Every town changes with time,
yet still, there are things that remain,
as we cherish our heritage

Here, I see nothing but a ghost town
No joy,
no interest on the part on the homeowners,
whomever they may be?

I still see a few footprints of a few friends,
Yet, one by one, the wind sweeps them clean
Though the wind blew me away,
I kept returning, only to see the waters fouled

Oh how I miss the day of humble beginnings
Maybe one day,
no, who am I fooling? ,
better to say
I miss the old days

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cowboy Ron Williams 13 July 2023

You are right, Bill. This website is not as good or as fun as it used to be. They pretty much ruined it when they went to the new system, but there is still much good here.

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Susan Williams 13 July 2023

you know how I love your friendship and your guidance... I'm not the only one who needs you... you are our oasis... just let the tumbleweeds tumble past us and go their haphazard way... we will sit and sip friendship and artistry from this oasis of ours... love you, old and true friend

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Susan Williams 13 July 2023

my dear old friend from more golden days--do not give up on the beautiful writers here because of the actions of the non-poetic souls

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