On The Jail Steps Poem by Eleanor Agnes Lee

On The Jail Steps

Rating: 3.7


I've won the race.
Young man, I'm new!
Old Sallow-face
Good luck to you!

I've turned about,
And paid for sin.
And you come out,
As I go in.

Ten years! but mark,
I am free, free!
Ten years of dark
Shall gather me.

My wife long-while
She wept her pain.
She cannot smile;
She weeps again.

My little one
Shall know my call.
Child is there none
For sin grows tall.

Now who are you,
Spar of hell's flood?
And who, and who,
But your own blood?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 18 September 2018

In Jail Oh ho ho no bail till decaying of Sin have to live in this bin dark and insects sin decaying facts! weeping wife growing child make all strife give a knife find the blood goes on forgetting life

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Priyanka Roy 18 September 2018

Very nice poem , and inspiring too.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 18 September 2018

Such a great write by Eleanor Agnes Lee👍👍👍

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Ratnakar Mandlik 24 August 2019

" My little one Shall know my call Child is there none For sin grows tall" Great conceptualization.

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 September 2018

Free at last! ! ! ! ! Freedom! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Gopal Lahiri 18 September 2018

A thoughtful and Moving poem! Thanks for sharing

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 September 2018

A beautiful poem so nicely executed. Interesting to read.

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Adrian Flett 18 September 2018

The interchange of voices on the jail steps tells of the misery of confinement and the challenge, when the time comes to be free.

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