My Story Poem by Daniel Brick

My Story

Rating: 5.0


On a windy day in early autumn
I went to my balcony with a folder
of all my love poems from twenty-five
years of writing. I read each one
in a voice that matched the wind's
passage across the still lush lawn
through the trees into a brightening
distance, which was this day's birth.

They were poems of lover and beloved,
their happiness, their fruitful conflicts,
their sojourns in seasons of plenty
or scarcity. And their gratitude to the Earth
for tilting on its axis one distant summer day,
so they were thrust into each other's arms.
Such were the poems I thrust into the wind's passage.

When I finished, the silence I felt around me
was a purely personal silence.Birds sang,
leaves rustled, traffic droned three blocks away,
and in the apartments around me, people readied
for the day's business, marshaling crucial facts,
rehearsing urgent speeches. Satisfied, couples
greeted each other and talked of inconsequential things.

I had heard the earliest bird songs
become a multitude singing from branches
and rooftops. Finches fly in wide swooping
circles. Two robins play a game of stealth,
temporarily silenced by their hunger. This is
just how I imagined my new world would begin,
with everything the same but profoundly altered.

I follow as always Goethe's example, who knew
when to turn desire into hope fulfilled, and
mind, naivete and sensuousness coalesce
into a new kind of poem which will be
perceived as a sacred response to this
new world birthing itself around me.
And through Goethe, Hafez offers his sweet advice.

As I gaze at this new world around me,
I am astonished by its abundance.
No trace of envy or disappointment,
this is an age of contentment from which
will spring only generous impulses, and
my voice, fortified by nature, amplified by agape,
will release songs of glory, shining with resolve.

This poem was inspired as a response
to MY STORY by Baharak Barzin.

Tuesday, August 15, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry,visionary
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Glen Kappy 17 August 2017

hey, daniel! i read this with interest. my main response is, thank God for each new day, for each new start- for there are no guarantees we'll have another- and it's best to live each day fully as it comes. you may have already read it- but if not- i have a poem, semi-retired in early spring, that comes to mind on reading this. for me early morning walks- particularly in summer- are particularly important. glen

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Nosheen Irfan 15 August 2017

That's a wonderful glimpse into a peaceful moment of your life and this feeling of contentment that you feel flows to the reader as well. Poetry does this to us...brings peace in the midst of life's frenzy, in the midst of fret and fever. Together with nature, poetry can heal. An enriching, enlightening experience you share when you are in perfect harmony with nature and your inner call. A huge 10.

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Kayode Are 15 August 2017

Touching. Sometimes looking back help others to look forward.

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Rini Shibu 15 August 2017

Daniel its nice to read this experience of yours Poetry is infinite and in your new worlds you are going to release songs of glory

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Daniel Brick 17 August 2017

Hi Rini This poem is about change and accepting it in due time. But the idea you express POETRY IS INFINITE is wonderful. I'm with you 100%! Poetry and its value din't change. They prevail forever.

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Simone Inez Harriman 15 August 2017

I always know in the first few lines where a poem will take me.....this one left me deep in thought of the years before the last of summer wine. Those years when one has hopefully achieved peace with their life decisions and are proud of their creative successes. Your poem reiterates to me the relevance of drinking in the beauty of this world...perhaps this is the key to where true happiness lies.

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