My eyes reveal
The scanned personalities
Of the people I came across
All the hidden agendas and
Forged smiles and crafty eyes
All the buttered babbles
And split personalities
Gosh! I have progressed remarkably
For the lessons I've memorized
The hard way in the journey of life
And in this journey I have met
A few gems among the stones
All I need to do was to filter
And cherish the best treasures.
©Aarzoo Mehek
Great scanner which every human possess though very few use them effectively. Lovely poem Aarzoo.
Thanks for your powerful eyes described in a very lucid and fine manner Aarzooji.
All I need to do was to filter And cherish the best treasures. Great conclusion. Very well penned! Thanks for sharing, Aarzoo.
I like to collect rocks. Sometimes the best ones are the ones you hardly want to pick up; but then you turn them over, or cut them, or polish them, and the surprise is so pleasant!
Excellent poem.Very correct steps in the last stanza.Thanks for sharing.Top scores Dear Aarzoo.
Captivating. It's great that you have filtered out the gems from the heap of stones
Loved the last four valuable words. A beautiful poem...liked it
I cite your last two lines: All I need to do was to filter And cherish the best treasures.Excellently concluded, gorgeous poem.5 Stars full score.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
2. For, is like peeing through the window into his/her bedroom. This gives us no peace.
Peeping…(error regretted)