My Eyes Reveal Poem by Aarzoo Mehek

My Eyes Reveal

Rating: 5.0


My eyes reveal
The scanned personalities
Of the people I came across
All the hidden agendas and
Forged smiles and crafty eyes
All the buttered babbles
And split personalities

Gosh! I have progressed remarkably
For the lessons I've memorized
The hard way in the journey of life

And in this journey I have met
A few gems among the stones
All I need to do was to filter
And cherish the best treasures.

©Aarzoo Mehek

My Eyes Reveal
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 23 February 2022

2. For, is like peeing through the window into his/her bedroom. This gives us no peace.

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Unnikrishnan E S 24 March 2022

Peeping…(error regretted)

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 24 February 2022

Great scanner which every human possess though very few use them effectively. Lovely poem Aarzoo.

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Nabakishore Dash 24 February 2022

Thanks for your powerful eyes described in a very lucid and fine manner Aarzooji.

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Irfanulla Shariff 29 March 2022

All I need to do was to filter And cherish the best treasures. Great conclusion. Very well penned! Thanks for sharing, Aarzoo.

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Rob Lamberton 23 January 2023

I like to collect rocks. Sometimes the best ones are the ones you hardly want to pick up; but then you turn them over, or cut them, or polish them, and the surprise is so pleasant!

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Nabakishore Dash 29 April 2022

Excellent poem.Very correct steps in the last stanza.Thanks for sharing.Top scores Dear Aarzoo.

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Captivating. It's great that you have filtered out the gems from the heap of stones

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 April 2022

Loved the last four valuable words. A beautiful poem...liked it

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 April 2022

I cite your last two lines: All I need to do was to filter And cherish the best treasures.Excellently concluded, gorgeous poem.5 Stars full score.

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