My Dues Are Paid Poem by Ivan Brooks Sr

My Dues Are Paid

Rating: 4.7


I came directly from through the ranks
All my dues paid, my homage to life
To my God alone all my humble thanks
For bread I slice with prayer knife.

I came strictly from my very own hood
All of my dues I paid through my strife
To mama dear for prayers and our food
For all she sacrificed to save my life.

I came humbly from a very blessed home
All my dues are paid through my chores
To charity, It said take and leave some
For all I learned I am beyond my shores.

I came strongly ready to join the hustle
My dues paid with my years of readiness
To poverty, a real caveat for my struggle
For I've persevered through steadfastness.

My Dues Are Paid
Wednesday, June 7, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: homage
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Our roots, our hoods, our homages and our dues are all a part of our upbring..
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 06 September 2017

Rich flow of thought. A well texted and nicely thought-out poem. It touched my heart. Thanks for sharing Ivan and do remain blessed.

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Ivan Brooks 07 September 2017

Thanks Chinedu, you've always made me feel like I'm almost there.

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Valsa George 12 July 2017

You can be proud that you have paid all your dues.... except to God! Such a thought can keep your head so high! Well penned Ivan!

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Ivan Brooks 13 July 2017

Thanks for your kind words Valsa...Kindly read '' Simpson And Delala ''

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Ivan Brooks 19 June 2017

It was a big surprise that this poem was chosen as ''Poem Of The Day''..I had no idea that when I penned the story of my humble beginning through poetry, a community of great minds would've chosen it as poem of the day. Thanks to all of you great poets who gave it your honest thoughts or expressed you likes and dislike, you all I appreciated!

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Ratnakar Mandlik 18 June 2017

For bread I slice with prayer knife. Superb conceptualization. Congrats on the poem of the Day.

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Ivan Brooks 19 June 2017

Thanks Ratnakar!

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Ivan Brooks 19 June 2017

''Poem of the day'' is both complementary and somehow a blessed flattery..for I pray to become like you great poets out there.Thanks!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 18 June 2017

Such an interesting poem... well-expressed... a highest 10+++++ You may visit my HEARTACHES WILL NEVER LAST and TAKE TIME TO THINK.... Congrats on being chosen...Thanks, Ivan....

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Ivan Brooks 19 June 2017

Thanks Bernard...I am surely going to read yours.

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Ivan Brooks Sr

Ivan Brooks Sr

Monrovia, Liberia
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