My Darling -05 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

My Darling -05

Rating: 5.0


How can I say darling
That you are not here?
You are spread everywhere
Over the land, the sea and the air.


In the sleep or in the dreams or
When I am in the awakened sphere,
You, like the fragrance in the air,
Are here, there, everywhere.

This is a translation of the poem ସଖୀ-05 (Sakhi_05) /Odia Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra
Monday, December 4, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: desire,eternity,friendship,heart song,loneliness,longing,love,love and art,love and friendship,love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Sakhi is a term used in all Indian epics and literature, Radha in the adolescence and Draupadi in his youth happened to be two Sakhis of lord SriKrishna a loving term to address the beloved girl friend.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sakalabaktula Sairaj 04 December 2017

so nice one sir keep it up

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 04 December 2017

Thank you dear poet for such inspiring words

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Bernard F. Asuncion 04 December 2017

Subhas, such a lovely write...10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 04 December 2017

Thank you sir for such inspiring words.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 December 2017

The love among Radha and Krishna through a sakhi has been hauntingly expressed. Beautiful poem on love and friendship. Thank u for sharing.

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Prativa Rani 06 December 2017

In the sleep or in the dreams or When I am in the awakened sphere, You, like the fragrance in the air, Are here, there, everywhere. Lovely description of platonic love. 10++++++ Rani

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Prativa Rani 06 December 2017

In the sleep or in the dreams or When I am in the awakened sphere, You, like the fragrance in the air, Are here, there, everywhere. Lovely description of platonic love.

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D Priyanka Singh 06 December 2017

In the sleep or in the dreams or When I am in the awakened sphere, You, like the fragrance in the air, Are here, there, everywhere. Lovely description of platonic love. So beautifully penned. 10++++++ DP

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D Priyanka Singh 06 December 2017

In the sleep or in the dreams or When I am in the awakened sphere, You, like the fragrance in the air, Are here, there, everywhere. Lovely description of platonic love. So beautifully penned.

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Alina Kaikeyi 05 December 2017

You, like the fragrance in the air, Are here, there, everywhere. Lovely description of platonic love. 10

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

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Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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