My Barren Mind Poem by Akachukwu Lekwauwa

My Barren Mind

Rating: 5.0


My poetry armory has been tampered with.
Poem is set to go off.

She has pulled the strings in my heart.
Love is set to sing.

Her beauty is captivating,
Coming forth as natural springs,
From the deep places of her being.

My barren mind has been pollinated
By her very essence,
Suddenly I am multiparous.

Friday, May 29, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love,poem,beauty
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by a well-mannered young lady at a time i had not written a poem for a long time. So it's dedicated to Lilian.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Queeny Gona 02 June 2015

Barren mind being pollinated by a beautiful lady resulting in multiparous. Metaphorical read Sir......Wonderful tribute to the well mannered lady even if you are late!

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thanks Queeny for your valued comment. The lady is alive and kicking!

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Paul Sebastian 04 June 2015

You have words flowing and paint the picture well. Great work. I like this stanza: Her beauty is captivating, Coming forth as natural springs, From the deep places of her being.

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Thanks Paul

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Nel Omofolarin 30 May 2015

Nice piece....If only she gets a chance to read this....she won't be unenchanted by this...that is one of the many potent magic of poetry....poetry is charming and this poem a very nice one.thanks for sharing

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Ernest Makuakua 12 January 2016

wonderfully composed piece and creative nice piece my friend keep writing

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A composition that is both compelling and creative!

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Hafid Chahidi 15 July 2015

A creatively composed poem. Thanks a lot for allowing us an insight into your poetic thoughts!

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Hazel Durham 07 June 2015

Beautiful write that is full of your passion that is lit by an eternal flame!

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Amitava Sur 07 June 2015

Liked your expression of love and liking for her.

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