Mind 4 - Mind A Slave Poem by Geeta Radhakrishna Menon

Mind 4 - Mind A Slave

Rating: 5.0


Mind behaves like a slave
If entangled in flow of thoughts,
Carried away by the intensity of emotions,
Into shores of unpredictable destinations.
When thoughts are cajoled and encouraged,
When thoughts are supported and chased,
Then, thoughts thrive with merriment,
With identification and embrace of the mind!

Monday, December 4, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: mind,thoughts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rini Shibu 04 December 2017

Well penned on mind and emotions Geeta

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Thank you Rini. Your comments are always sweet and nice.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 October 2021

It's an insightful piece of work dear madam... thanks for sharing..5 stars

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Loke Kok Yee 19 January 2018

This poem sat in my mind for awhile and I gave it much thoughts. It had became a slave to your poem, therefore; you are correct about the mind behaving like a slave. Thanks Geeta.

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Yiyan Han 05 January 2018

Mind behaves like a slave Could act like a master ... ;)

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Yes Yiyan, Mind behaves like a slave. But certainly, with strong determination and will power, mind can be a Master too. Thank you, Yiyan

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Tom Allport 21 December 2017

a very thought provoking write that is full of good advice? .............well penned Geeta

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Tom, so good of you to read this poem and comment on it. Thank you so much. Stay blessed.

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 December 2017

So true. Nice poem with a nice flow. Loved it.

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Anil, thank you so much for your nice comment.

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