Lucky In Life Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Lucky In Life

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Two birds are flying close together
Wings are touching each other
Swiftly across the orange sky
I wonder where they fly.

I see two lovers sitting together
Arms in arms and cheek to cheek
They know, can talk, but keep silence
I wonder what eyes fry.

Husband and wife walk separate- separate
Children holding their hands in-between
For them the birds and lovers are the devils
I wonder what for they cry.

Life for some is joy and wonder
For others, it's testing and exhausting
They are indeed very lucky
Who learn to cope with a life's try.

Monday, October 3, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 05 October 2016

Love and life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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M Asim Nehal 17 November 2018

Thx much my friend Kofi.

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Bharati Nayak 03 October 2016

A marvelous poem- - -If birds are happy, lovers are happy, why husband and wife walk separate and why they see the lovers or birds as devils? A pertinent question.Sure, love is missing from them.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 03 October 2016

Profound philosophical message in four stanzas. Thank you for sharing.

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M Asim Nehal 14 December 2018

Thank u so much Jayatissa.

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Unwritten Soul 03 October 2016

Wonderful poem, at this point i think you convinced me that you are a keen observer, yes i know you are a talented writer long time before...Keen observer mean you are able to crafting whats happened around into something relatable...and then convey message for others...i truly enjoyed it Asim :)

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M Asim Nehal 03 October 2016

Thank u so much, I am humbled....I am happy that u liked it.

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Rajnish Manga 03 October 2016

The poet has taken a panoramic view of relationships around him and found them experiencing joys or turmoils in life. Only those can be termed as lucky who get through the testing times and come out unscathed. Great poem. Thanks for sharing, Md. Asim ji. Life for some is joy and wonder For others, it's testing and exhausting

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M Asim Nehal 03 October 2016

I salute you for specific and correct interpretation. You always amaze me with your interpreting abilities. Thank u so much, Rajnishji...

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M Asim Nehal 03 October 2016

I salute you for specific and correct interpretation. You always amaze me with your interpreting abilities. Thank u so much, Rajnishji.......

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