Love's Deepest Pain Poem by Sandra Feldman

Love's Deepest Pain

Rating: 4.8


The mood is right,
All dreams thru Poetry
Have taken flight,
They take me back
To, you
In a way
That only Poetry
And true Love
Can do,
And I cry
Knowing that
My dream
Will not ever
In our time
Come true,
Now,
I feel
Like a child
With a broken doll
That won't
Come back to
Life,
No matter
What you do.
Now,
My life is tied
To the past
I could not face
But no longer
Can forget
Nor hide.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 08 November 2022

Great flow and rhythm. And your words have a universality about them. I can connect so well. Five stars!

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 22 December 2022

Past is the tie of the poetic present and there are something memorable that poet can't hide from anyone or the future. Congrats for being selected the poem as POD

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Jayne Louise Davies 07 November 2022

Great write Sandra! Five stars*

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 08 November 2022

Love's deepest pain through poetic dreamy flight

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 December 2022

My Congratulations for you dearest Sandra was swept away by PH by its famous RED text, it murmurs about 300 words or was it 30 words? I star anew, es ist nichts Schlimmes, liebe Freundin

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Sandra Feldman 23 December 2022

Thank you all, dear, dear poet friends for gifting this poem and me with such unforgettable words and feelimgs

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 December 2022

Yes, when true love strikes, it will follow you wherever you go...until eternity. Beautiful, beautiful poem, my dearest friend. Honest and wonderfully executed. Congratulations for a well deserved accolade. To my favorites.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 December 2022

A deeply touching and poignant poem so powerfully expressed but there is so much tenderness in those words used that could tear our hearts.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 December 2022

Love, life and Poetry have that magical and special bond. Poetry understands love and life, their pains and joys. The pains we feel, we could express through Poetry and somehow the void we feel, it heals. Poetry is indeed a healer.

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Sandra Feldman 27 December 2022

So true, so true, so true, dear poetess and friend, you capture and express the essence of poems and poetry in the truest and most beautiful way imaginable and deeply felt,

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