Love You Are A Bubble Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Love You Are A Bubble

Rating: 5.0


Love you are like a bubble

If you burst will spill trouble

Like clouds you float on air

Just look for mountain and beware

So long you are dry you shall float in sky

With heaviness you will fall

Your fate will be decided by air

Whether to take you to the farmland or to any wetland,

Remember dry earth will absorb you,

mountain will slide you

With river you will lose identity,

If you are fortunate you will fall in sea

Then people will write success story about thee,

Love I want to see that you become SEA…..

Thursday, February 25, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,love,philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 22 March 2016

Just look for the mountains and beware! Nice work.

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Aarzoo Mehek 26 February 2016

sochte hain ki bulbula ho jaain chand lamhe jiyen fanaa ho jaain Ashhad Bilal ishq dariya hai aur dariya hi iska muqadar hai Na qaid karo mujhko ansuon ki rawaani main...... ++++10 for this beautiful poem

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Kelly Kurt 25 February 2016

I really liked this one, Mohammed. With luck, the bubble of love will find and become the sea

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Abhilasha Bhatt 25 February 2016

Really a good one.....wonderful philosophy on life for life......thank you for sharing :)

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