longer days -
catching more
morning melodies
new neighbor
at the hedge
she cuts both sides
published in moonset,2009 Autumn/Winter-Edition 5/Number 2
see: www.moonset.us
Both excellent poems Ben and it is good to see a haiku and senryu side by side to note the difference of the forms. I can relate to the longer days as with daylight saving, we have heaps of time to catch those morning melodies. I will go for a look at moonset too and see what beams there! 10 Karin
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Strictly speaking ben both are terse verse Neither complies to the syllable count but none the less both have great impact ivor