Lodestar Poem by Rini Shibu

Lodestar

Rating: 4.0


When You are flying in the sky
Suddenly the light disappears
And darkness blinds your eyes
What could you do than to cry
And fly in the dark as much as you can
Hoping to find the streams of light
The journey may sear your emotions
But it will make you more strong
Then a star shines far away in the sky
To guide your way to fly

Friday, January 19, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: star,darkness,light
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 January 2018

A very inspiring write beautifully crafted. Yes, we should keep on flying.Darkness should not be a hindrance. A great piece.10

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Rini Shibu 20 January 2018

Thanks Rose for posting your comment Rini

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Lamar Cole 19 January 2018

Great and inspiring poem filled with hope.

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Akhtar Jawad 04 November 2020

Such a star is an evidence that there is a God who has created this universe. A thoughtful poem.

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Suresh Kumar Ek 03 September 2020

sometimes darkness gives power, good

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Robert Murray Smith 24 July 2018

Rini, I loved this imaginative poem.++++10 Robert

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Rebecca Navarre 24 March 2018

A Beautifully Touching And Inspiring Painting! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Rini Shibu 25 March 2018

Thanks Rebecca Navarre for reading and commenting

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 February 2018

To guide your way! Thanks for sharing.

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Rini Shibu 25 March 2018

Thanks Edward..sorry for the delayed response

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