Lock And The Key Poem by Rini Shibu

Lock And The Key

Rating: 5.0


Little pain is pleasurable when 
It is followed by soothing love
when you are in love, you are in joy
And wish to have more and more

If love is the lock and pain the key
Without this key love can't be unlocked
Without pain you won't gain love
And pain disappears once you get love

Love and pain both are inter linked
Pain is the single pill for the love
Because pain increases the longing
and longing intensifies the love

Tuesday, October 24, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love,pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 25 October 2017

As light is accentuated by darkness, pain intensifies love! After a mild quarrel, lovers come together with greater warmth and understanding! This is usually proved true not only with regard to lovers but in most cases! I greatly admire your concluding lines, Rini!

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Rini Shibu 25 October 2017

Thank you so much for reviewing, glad that you liked it

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Suresh Kumar Ek 03 September 2020

pain is the key to love. nice

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Robert Murray Smith 13 May 2018

An insightful write that seems right.+++10

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Carl Roussell 19 April 2018

Very nice writing. Thanks for posting.

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Rini Shibu 19 April 2018

Thank you so much Carl Roussel..! ! !

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Unnikrishnan E S 08 January 2018

Hi Rini, Beautiful poem on love and the associated pain, may I say! You state, Love and pain both are inter linked Pain is the single pill for the love Because pain increases the longing and longing intensifies the love... Well done. A 100++

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Rini Shibu 08 January 2018

Thanks Unnikrishnan for your great comment Rini

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 25 October 2017

Hi Rini, The Lock and Key is a symbol of love acknowledged by lovers all over the world. I have walked through two bridges, one in Koln in Germany and one in Paris in France. Along the bridge thousands of locks can been seen. I was unaware of its significance, until, i actually saw them. When i read your poem, i went back into the memory lane of these beautiful bridges. Let me quote your last verse: Love and pain both are inter linked Pain is the single pill for the love Because pain increases the longing and longing intensifies the love I love your style of writing. :) - A big 10 for you!

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Rini Shibu 25 October 2017

Thanks Geetha, happy to hear that you like my style

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