Little Lamb Freed Poem by Shoshana Piatek

Little Lamb Freed

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Little lamb she got out
Out of briars and thorns
Her wool was all stuck
Until she got shorn

Loosed of the hot wool
That dead heavy stuff
Now lamby is dancing
On a path that's not rough

Her path is glistening
Full of flowers and green
Lit up by the Son
By truths recently seen

Not see with the naked eye
But seen by the heart
The heart knows the truth
And where one must start

Little Lamb Freed
Friday, June 28, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: salvation,bible,dance,dancing,freedom,jesus
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 18 August 2019

such a nice start, Shoshana. You may like to read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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Chinedu Dike 30 June 2019

Well articulated and nicely brought forth in beautiful rhyme scheme with spiritual insight. Thanks for sharin, Shoshana.

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Shoshana Piatek 18 August 2019

Thank you!

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Shoshana Piatek

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Boston, MA
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