Kite Flies Away Poem by AKHIL RAVEENDRAN

Kite Flies Away

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There was a day in my life; I spread my wings to find you,
What a Peace full day that was,  no one tried to make me fall.
Someone likes to make changes; I try to do,
what they want.
And finally find that you want; that make me to fall.

Don't want to earn some thing by losing things with me.
Before you love something, you must learn to let them go.
 
The wind starts dancing with my kite and fly away from me.
And clouds run away from sky and gave me space to fly.
Live your life that you want, try to make it large.



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Kite Flies Away
Tuesday, April 5, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: fly,love and dreams,pain
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
kite
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 13 April 2016

There are lines in this that are simply gorgeous, calling the reader to share your experience as if we were there: - - - ] There was a day in my life; I spread my wings to find you, What a Peace full day that was, no one tried to make me fall. - -] The wind starts dancing with my kite and fly away from me. And clouds run away from sky and gave me space to fly. Live your life that you want, try to make it large. - - - - - - - - - - - - - ] the image of that kite and your flying of it is so well handled.

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Akhil Raveendran 13 April 2016

thank you very much...

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Akhil Raveendran 13 April 2016

thank you susan williams..

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Anil Kumar Panda 22 December 2016

Full of hope and confidence it is a very nice poem. Liked it. Thanks for sharing.

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Beautiful poem dear poet! Each and every line is beautiful.. Fabulously penned poem!

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Unnikrishnan E S 30 April 2016

Akhil, We face headwinds that try to fell us wherever we go, whatever we do. But yes, sooner or later, if we persevere, clouds run away and give us space to fly. Live our life that we want. And try to make it LARGE. Your poem exudes lot of positive energy. Great poetry. Do continue to write. Thank you sharing.

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Akhil Raveendran 01 May 2016

thank you unni..

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Shrutika Kahale 23 April 2016

before you love something, you must learn to let them go..... very true

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 April 2016

Try to make it large! But, with positiveness. Nice work.

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Akhil Raveendran 17 April 2016

HA HA i will try.. THANK YOU Edward louis

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