Jazib Kamalvi Has Taken My Lust In Exchange Of Love Poem by me poet yeps poet

Jazib Kamalvi Has Taken My Lust In Exchange Of Love

Rating: 4.1

Jazib KAMALVI'S

LUST AND LOVE POETRY
is amust read

why

LOVE smashes lust
then
Lust takes over
engulfs all of it

Friends who love first
then lust

a read of this is utmost
and
those who only lust
butforget love
for them 'tis uppermost

AND

AS FOR ME
I KNOW only
there is a great commonality
in LOVE AND LUST

Both have the letter 'L'
as first

WOW

did you not know it?

Ignorance inmodern era
in poets is not accepted

don't miss a Misssimilarly
in a MISS and silly miss
okay g

what is common
do you now know it

well now done
letter
'M'
ahhhhh exactly

so LOVE and later Lust
with a MISS only
without a miss

Saturday, February 9, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,beauty of rose,fun,funny,love and life,lust,poetic expression,sex
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
NOTES
IN LIFE
BOTH LOVE AND LUST are needed
Which should or must come first
is like an egg and chicken theory
All know it
Don't you
ooooooooooooo poets
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prabir Gayen 09 February 2019

Beautiful poem dear poet thanks...love becomes it distorts...

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Dr Antony Theodore 09 February 2019

love and worthy of pondering. a fine poem. tony

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Eden Trinidad 12 March 2019

I have read your poem Jazib Kamalvi. Thanks for sharing. Eden S Trinidad

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Ebey Alex 25 June 2021

Nice work buddy...quiete a different attempt. Keep it up🤗🤗🤗

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Paul Falconer 20 April 2021

Excellent poem..5 stars.. Keep it going Jazib

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Patrick Jomo 20 January 2020

Wow, this is nice Jazib. I love it!

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Jazib Kamalvi 19 September 2019

Write comment. Thanks for your visit, words and time, dear poet!

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Poppi Sykes 09 April 2019

I've read it and I Love it! Thank you Jazib Kamalvi for suggesting it as well as sharing! Love and is very confusing to understand in any relationship as well as in this poem. - Psykes

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