Is This The Life We Search For? Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Is This The Life We Search For?

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Agony pain and suffering
Where the sun is all burning
And the water bodies are becoming dry
he dense forest losing charm
Where the birds are wandering
Where the heart cry for peace
Nobody wish to swim in the lake
The place so deserted
Where loud clouds burst
Rivers are full with water
The gushing water is flooding
The chirping of crickets annoys
Is this the life we search for?

Saturday, June 11, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
T Rajan Evol 07 December 2016

This is natural beauty which forced you to write on this subject, You are a fantastic poet by far your age.

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 June 2016

Peace and love! ! To respect life. Nice work.

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Darren Jkoeryo 11 June 2016

Nature alone cannot fulfil our desires hence we made concrete jungle and we prefer to live there and occasionally visit the nature to cherish the beauty, the metaphor Abandoned Boat speaks about the life left carefree with nature and its surrounding. The joy of living in real world against the artificial world is elusive due to human greed and creation. Great Poem MAN.

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Kelly Kurt 11 June 2016

It is a moment in life that when recognized and appreciated, brings perspective, joy and contentment. Not searched for, but found. Beautiful poem, Mohammed.

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