Into The Abyss Poem by Marcondes Pereira

Into The Abyss

Rating: 4.8


Is there something more
scary
than don't know where your memory
has guided your story?
I can't see where I am anymore.

Sleeping through the waltz of the light,
fighting a war during the silent night.

Friday, August 25, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: illness,mind
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 25 August 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Pereira. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Marcondes P 25 August 2017

Thank you my firend. I'm glad to know that you liked my poem. I will read yours as well.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 August 2017

Fighting a war during the silent night provokes thought and this happens with many of the persons. There are memories in mind still we search ourselves inside. Wisely penned poem is shared here.10

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Marcondes P 25 August 2017

You're absolutely right, dear reader. Sometimes is during the sleep time, that we fight our biggest wars, and they happen inside our minds. A cruel battle among us, our past, and our future.

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