In Niagara Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

In Niagara

Rating: 5.0


Anchored on the Rainbow, heedless of the wandering pairs
Hand in Hand, hearts entwined, lost in dreams of love and life,
And without the least botheration of the passing vehicles
Watched the wonder, feasting aesthetic passion

In the daylight liquid silver, in the moonlight melted gold
The super Goldsmith empties his melting crucible
Bursts into drops and droplets, sprinkles and sprays
Fumes and foams, bubbles and froths drawing a veil of fog

Life stumbles on big boulders and falls down the edge
Never to climb back finds pleasure in flowing down
I heard no roar but three maids singing in chorus
May be in praise of Lelawala and the thunder god Heno

Beauty of the sun, the moon and the glittering stars,
Rainbow and the raining clouds, the dawn and the dusk
Percolate into its heart for the beauty seekers to delight
On the rich soul of the nature's gift by Gods and men alike

In the moonlit night I could see vague images of the Maid of Mist
And the Gods of Thunder coming out from the caves behind
Watching the fireworks that illuminate sky and hearts,
The falls and the flowing river, the bridges and the floating boats

Below the bridge, in the pool there lay the boat, in the day
Took me too near the falls to be wet through, I rejoice,
By the loving hug of the Maid of the Mist and being
In her wet arms for a while, a very short while

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I had kept close to my heart a wish to see The Niagara Falls right
in my school days which manifested in July 2012. The poem is based on my tour notes
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 31 January 2019

In the daylight liquid silver, in the moonlight melted gold The super Goldsmith empties his melting crucible Bursts into drops and droplets, sprinkles and sprays Fumes and foams, bubbles and froths drawing a veil of fog Love this stanza! A sure 10

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Thank you Valsa George for sharing your personal experience of visiting the falls which I am very glad to know.I am specially thankful to you for your graceful and magnanimous comments and rating as you have always been

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Vidya 31 January 2019

Truly remarkable words. Your poem has captured the beauty and majesty of the Niagara Falls, inspiring us to experience it all over again!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 31 August 2023

Yes, Niagara Falls is worth seeing with your very own eyes. With over 168,000 cubic meters flowing the Falls every minute, no other waterfall in the world has the same intensity. And yes, the rainbow always adorn the great Falls. Beautifully crafted poem with superb imagery.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 31 August 2023

The beauty and wonders of Niagara Falls have been brilliantly painted on the canvas of this great poem. The fascinating images make me at close range with the enchanting wonder of the world.

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Savita Tyagi 10 February 2019

Beautiful poem. Niagara is an out of this world sight. All the beauty and overflowing of emotions that come with seeing Niagara has been captured in this lovely poem. A 10++

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Thank you Savithaji. I am very glad to read your comments that confirms the positive aspects of my humble attempt.

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 09 February 2019

a thing of beauty is joy forever. beauty is truth, truth beauty-that is all ye know on earth, and all ye need to know.- a beautiful poem!

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Thank you very much Jagdish Singh Ramana. Where there is truthfulness there will be God and where there is God there is beauty - all eternal Thank you for reminding the fact

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Richard Wlodarski 04 February 2019

A stunningly beautiful tribute to the majestic Niagara Falls. You should seriously consider sending it to the Chamber of Commerce.

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