Immoral Writings In Distinctive Style Poem by Sophie Allyah

Immoral Writings In Distinctive Style

Rating: 4.4


When the mind is in wonder of chaos
The creation becomes pure insanity
Acquiring the gift of beauty in throes
In a decent dark artistic integrity

Straying into the darkest obsession
To create is to wander in mind deep and far
The fill become immoral in perfection
That mark the concoction of pretty scar

Reshaping and raping for poetic justice
A dark, violent and sometimes gory imagery
Bringing forth a brimming mysterious madness
In direful detail in all its glory

Immoral Writings In Distinctive Style
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 22 June 2020

A well composed poem of the day. Simply amazing. Congrats on your featured piece...10+++

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Andrew Belga 15 August 2020

thank you sir Bernard I really appreciate the comment and sorry for the late late reply

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L MILTON HANKINS 04 September 2020

This poem, like many of this poet's, is dark and deep. Belga's flirtation with the occult and the mystical side is both interesting and challenging.

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Chinedu Dike 27 August 2020

An insightful rendition of words nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 June 2020

It's a beautiful composition! Many congratulations! !

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Andrew Belga 15 August 2020

thanks! and sorry for the late reply

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Ratnakar Mandlik 22 June 2020

Genesis of creation, in general and that of a poem in particular., marvelously unfolded. Hearty congrats on poem of the day.

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Andrew Belga 15 August 2020

thanks a lot and sorry for the late reply

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Dr Antony Theodore 22 June 2020

Straying into the darkest obsession To create is to wander in mind deep and far The fill become immoral in perfection. very fine poem indeed dear poet Andrew. tony

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Andrew Belga 15 August 2020

thanks Dr Tony and sorry for the late reply

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Sophie Allyah

Sophie Allyah

Iloilo City Philippines
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