If I Loved You Poem by Sara Militello

If I Loved You

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If I loved you I'd know you well
enough so I could tell
You all that's on my mind
And everything I'd leave behind.

We'd lie on the beach unfettered, free
Enjoying the grandeur of the sea
Nowhere seeing or sensing a care
Only joy bursting out everywhere.

We'd watch the sunset swathed in red
No hungers clamoring to be fed
The surf breaking foamy white
Tucking another day from sight.

I'd remember always your smile so bright
My love so strong I had to write
how no sight on Earth could so light
up the night as that billowy nimbus cloud flight.

I'd remember too the magic view
That almost matched the nearness of you
As love, laughter and moonlight mirrored my wonder
Your sighs matched mine so joyously right.

March 3,1992

Saturday, June 1, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I'd somehow overlooked this poem. Found it among my unsorted papers and articles. The year I wrote it my favorite song was 'If I Loved you" by Oscar Hammerstein II. I could not stop humming and singing it. Finally I wrote this poem as my own version of what I would do or think if I was with someone I loved. I knew I'd remember. And I have.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aqua Flower 01 June 2019

So glad you found this magically write! Love that is so joyously right! Superb dear poetess! Thank you for sharing this!

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Sandra Feldman 01 June 2019

It's a beautifully written poem, expressive, and highly descriptive with views light and bright, like song. Well constructed images, descriptive feelings and very attractive form. A true delight to read and be remembered.

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