I Want To Take A Pilgrimage Poem by Susan Williams

I Want To Take A Pilgrimage

Rating: 5.0


I want to take a pilgrimage
to somewhere I have never been
or to somewhere I have ever been
it does not matter--it can be today or tomorrow or any age
.
I want to take my heart on a pilgrimage
and show it the deep rolling ocean waves
or the shimmering mountain river waves
it does not matter--as long as it is not a cage.
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I want to take my memories on a pilgrimage
and show them all the good roads I once travelled
or all the difficult paths I wish I hadn't travelled
it does not matter--I can always turn Past's page
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I want to take my soul on a pilgrimage
and dive deep into the Jordan that purifies
or rise with the sun singing a new song that clarifies
it does not matter--my spirit will soon be riding the land of purple sage.
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~~~~~~~~~~~©2021 Susan Williams.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 06 June 2021

How I want to do that Right now Bravo!

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Smoky Hoss 27 March 2022

The dance of, and into, life! ! ! Beautiful!

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Susan Williams 23 July 2022

Ah, Smoky, you understand so well, my friend!

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Chinedu Dike 24 January 2022

Well articuated and nicely expressed thoughts and feelings.

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Susan Williams 23 July 2022

Thank you very much, Chinedu, your words are always dear to my heart

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Bharati Nayak 19 January 2022

I want to take my heart on a pilgrimage and show it the deep rolling ocean waves or the shimmering mountain river waves it does not matter--as long as it is not a cage.--Such a beautiful poem!

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Susan Williams 23 July 2022

your response is as poetic as your heart, Bharati, and that is declaring you have a huge talented heart

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 19 January 2022

Loved the flow of your poem, dear friend Susan! A top score for the mesmerising pilgrimage....

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Susan Williams 23 July 2022

Thank you for reading my poems and encouraging me on!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 19 January 2022

I want to take my soul on a Pilgrimage......how wonderful! This is exactly what i have been thinking too!

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