I'M Ok Poem by Juliana Galal

I'M Ok

Rating: 4.5


She is smiling, she is having fun
Her sky is blue with a shinning sun
She is perfectly happy, she is just fine
She made her life her own design!
But come and take a look at her heart and mind
You'll see things that you didn't expect to find
You'll see a torn heart with a burden inside
And a river of tears hiding behind
You expected to see a paradise but you found hell
And still there is so much that she couldn't tell
All that she can do is to pretend
To be happy and perfectly content
To draw a fake smile on her face
until she returns to her hiding place
Where she can weep and cry for the rest of the day
Where her smile fade and her laugh fly away
And the next day she appears as she was
Singing like a bird and smiling like a rose
From inside there is a wild storm
But outside it's a calm river
Although her heart is torn
She'll keep saying'I'm OK' forever

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maria Gonzalez 26 July 2015

Nice poem Juliana. I quite enjoyed it.

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Mohammad Skati 13 February 2013

HI, JULIANA.I LIKED YOUR POEM.THANKS.

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Gajanan Mishra 03 February 2013

Making own design of life. I like it. good write.

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Dave Walker 03 February 2013

A great poem, like it.

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