I Hate You Poem by Shastina McElmurry

I Hate You



I hate you because you dont understand.
You dont even try to give me a helping hand.
I have stumbled down and cant get back to my feet.
I hate you because its me you beat.
All the brusies and all the pain.
I hate you because thats how you will remain.
You kicked me when i was down.
I hate you your worthless and in my sarrows you will drown.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A good poem. Read my poem, I HATE MYSELF

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Alen Alexander 09 June 2009

a not bad poem at all, but uhh in ur sorrows he'll drown? that ain right i guess!

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Matthew C. L. Pratt 29 May 2009

Good poem, the last line especially.

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Shekhar Joshi 29 May 2009

........ in my sorrows you will drown... nope in your sorrows its u only who will drown not him/her.. nicely written sad poem

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