I Close My Eyes Poem by Maria Mitea

I Close My Eyes

Rating: 5.0


I feel your shivers nestling inside me,
I feel the trace of your embrace, I want to cry
In the midst of old dreams, I wonder
And I don't wonder, I run, and I don't run,
Why are you coming to me, why, appearance?

Your breath touches my living hand
My shy breath clings to your whisper,
Sitting at the table, asleep to the mystery
You love, and your love loves the white paper
That comes to your mind like a blink.

We meet în the same thought, on the same line,
On the same letter, the eager thought urges you
Dance, go inside her, invite her to dance,
We embrace in the same word, in oblivion
You invite me to admire you, I want to love you.

I'm in a hurry, your words caress me familiarly,
You were so close to me, gentle wind,
I wonder why I haven't seen you then,
When I was beside you, right across the river
Serene view, I see you rising in me, I wonder,

Are you a poetic fantasy of yesterday or today?
Are you waking me up from the waiting dream?
For an eternity, I close my eyes and find you
On the same line, in the same word, in tumult
We dance the appearance in the same breath.

Sunday, November 29, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amir Marandi 29 November 2020

Great poetic imageries. I believe dreams are the realization of fantasies in another realm.

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Dr. antony theodore 29 November 2020

I'm in a hurry, your words caress me familiarly, You were so close to me, gentle wind, I wonder why I haven't seen you then, When I was beside you, right across the river i see you rising in me....... a very fine poem. tony

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Rob Lamberton 22 January 2023

"I close my eyes and find you On the same line, in the same word… in the same breath."5*****

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Rajnish Manga 23 May 2022

The mysticism weaves its way from beginning to the end which casts its spell upon the reader. Can we call it romancing with nature?

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Thomas Case 22 February 2021

Great poem, I really like it

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Yiyan Han 01 December 2020

Close eyes and let the imagination run free. Wonderful piece 5+++

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Kostas Lagos 29 November 2020

Beautiful poem Maria Mitea! Keep on posting

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