His Kiss Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Your deep, deep pain, reflected by tears akin to morning dew so poetically conceived, increase the flow of the pain of betrayle

A poem so painfully and delicately concieved it flow right into our hearts, so strongly and unforgettably. A very sad but beautiful work.

1) How nature controls our thoughts is again evident from this excellent poem, whether you like it or not, a little event leads us to moments tragic or happy,

2) it's how our mood is at that moment, your beautiful poem about this event, I still remember, but what I appreciate most in you, you have kept your self-esteem. I got very sad, but that wasn't true love, certainly not.

This magnificent poem touches my heart deeply..5 Stars full on Top.

Strikingly brilliant depiction of the deception. Love is just a chemical reaction. Only when we realize the true human nature we will be content with life.

Excellent and impeccable piece.....as always.....

Deeply felt grief so touchingly expressed in succinct verse. And what a great analogy!

Nature can be calming but callous, just like the betrayal of a lover who betrays ones trust. These words transcend into feelings we have all felt.

Powerfully painted imagery that goes straight to the heart! .. Excellently expressed! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++