Her Big Tail Caused Endless Trails Poem by Sheeya Hacks
Her Big Tail Caused Endless Trails
There was a cat with a big, bushy tail,
to manage it, was quite the tall tale.
It swished and it swooshed, all day and night,
Oh, that tail gave the kitty quite the fright!
When she tried to jump up on the chair,
her tail would knock down all in its snare.
The flowers on the table, they would sway,
as the kitty's tail had its wild display.
She couldn't squeeze through narrow gaps,
her big tail got caught in all the traps.
When she chased her toys with great delight,
her tail would tangle, what a woeful sight!
The mice that she stalked would often laugh,
as her tail entangled in their path.
She'd swat at them wildly, with a furry flair,
but her tail would always get stuck somewhere.
Her friends, the dogs, would wag their tails,
while her big tail caused endless trails.
They'd run and play with such finesse,
while her tail got caught in a tangled mess.
But despite the hassle with such a long tail,
the kitty still sported it without a wail.
Kitty once felt the heat and was excited to see a male.
When she sat in front of the mate to mate he failed-by-tail.
And though it may cause some funny trouble,
remember, it's what makes you truly double.
I am lost within the tail. Your poetic tail is also growing fast, I can assure nobody will be able to match your heat on PH. Wonderful poem with great Rhyme. Bri aka Brian will have his own observations on your LONG TAIL and ITS TRAIL.
Funny and interesting poem, I don't know how to react but enjoyed it thoroughly.
Kim's opinions aside, I and Asim and Rajan seem to disagree with him/Kim. : ) bri Maybe he didn't have his eyeglasses on?
The very last, tip-of-the-tail, part of my very last comment here (for now anyway) may not have been completely complete. : ) bri
(cont.) 'double'...LEAVE IT BE. IT MAY STIMULATE SOME READERS' MIND WHICH DON'T OTHERWISE GET STIMULATED (much) . Bri's last line: '...it also causes a wideswath of RUBBLE.Z
now i see 2 typos in my comment above: 'READER'S MIND' OR 'READERS' MINDS' I should have typed. btw I see and will leave 'as is' my 'now i' at the start of this reply to me! !
GEE, CAN I TAKE 1/2 OF ONE STAR BACK? ? TOO LATE! ! And PH DOES NOT ALLOW DOUBLE-VOTING. Ah, 'double', the poem's last word & THE WORD which caused me to wonder. (cont.)
Sheeya, In a message to me days ago, I THINK you hinted for me to read this poem, but until today (while reviewing some messsages we have exchanged) I neglected your 'hint'.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/5/2024 12:31:02 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Don't tr to read too much between the legs and beyond the tail.
Well then, Sheeya, may I 'TRY' fo 'REACH' 'too much.....'? ? ? It might be interesting IF I don't get mortally-scratched! ! !