He Made Me Forget To Breathe 6/6/17 Poem by MyIner Agony

hmmmm...nice poem written about the life changing experience. Congratulations, it being poem of the day. Happy reading and writing.

The narrative lets the reader have the feel of your life changing experience but I don't agree with your statement 'I never imagined it be so fun to lose my innocence.' You did not hurt your innocence. Nobody can snatch away your innocence. It is a part of your being unless you squander it yourself.

Poetically and artistically written... I rate it 10++++ You may visit my BECAUSE I LOVE HER... Thanks...

a poem of lost innocence that will never be forgotten? ......................well written.

First love, first experience, first step towards a settled life. What an enthralling world it could have been! Very well penned personal experience. Thanks for sharing. Congrats for being the member's PoD. X

Amazing write especially on a concept rarely explored.

What an amazing piece young lady. Sounds like your 'first' won't be easily forgotten...to say the least. Great poem. And CONGRATS' on being chosen 'POD! Such a well deserved honor. I'm giving this a 10++++ rating.

Opening a new door! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Nothing is ever the same after the first time! Good poem, a ten and congratulations on being poet of the day..

Wow! This expands my understanding of the word FUN. I think it is wonderful that people are capable of a multi-level experience composed not just of pleasure but also of belonging, and a sense of spaciousness in life. It is wonderful how an experience can become a vantage point for looking at life. You share all this in a direct, open-hearted way, so it refreshes my questions. I always wonder how and why we have the capability for such an experience.? ? That too is part of the fun! It takes years to digest the meaning of such an experience, so in a sense it never ends.