Hamburger Cheek....[ The Perils Teeth Pose; Short; Limerick ] Poem by Bri Edwards

Hamburger Cheek....[ The Perils Teeth Pose; Short; Limerick ]

Rating: 4.5


At times my teeth bite more than my meal,
and then those around me may hear a squeal **.
I 'make' hamburger meat...
from tongue, lips, or cheek.
I'm not lying about this; ...it is real.

(June 25th,2023)

[and it IS painful]

bri
:)

** squeal: intransitive verb:
one definition: 'To give forth a loud shrill cry or sound'

Sunday, June 25, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: accident,truth,humorous
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I believe I've said (most of) it above. It may take a repetition of biting on lip, inside surface of a cheek, or tongue, but I HAVE DONE THAT (sometimes) . bri :)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sheeya Hacks 26 June 2023

Ha ha ha take care of your teeth don't let is free like bull in the ring. Liked it. Five *****

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Bri Edwards 30 June 2023

merci, my friend

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Bri Edwards 28 June 2023

Thanks, Sheeya, But I think you 'mean': 'don't let them (referring to my teeth) be free..' What? ! Only 5 stars. Hey, I PAYED YOU the ten dollars to comment. : ( bri

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Kim Barney 25 June 2023

I have done the same thing quite a few times, and it IS painful!

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Bri Edwards 30 June 2023

That's ok, ...as long as the 'cheek' you bite is NOT mine! Sorry, Kim. I shouldn't be so cheeky. : (

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Bri Edwards 25 June 2023

Go ahead, be the 'first one'...oops! .....make that 'the second one' to 'comment on this poem'. Personally, and I'm NOT BIASED DUE TO MY RELATIONSHIP WITH THE POET, this poem is FANTASTIC! ! : ) bri

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