Hallelujah Poem by Takbeer Salati

Hallelujah

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In the Showers of Tears of Rain,
I felt each drop piercinglike my own
Guilt capturing its moments.
In the Showers of Tears of Rain,
I felt each rose water drop onto my skin
Purifying my soul yet another time faking it.
In the Showers of Tears of Rain,
I felt the shallowness of grief deep within
And I couldn't reach to its aisle.
In the Showers of Tears of Rain,
I felt each cloud burst happening in the vaccum
Each time splitting up the new hopes.
In the showers of tears of rain
I climbed the mightiest of the trees
Not giving me a chance to commit sin
Once more.
And each time in the showers of tears of rain
The old couple reminiscing the folksong
Felt like dying into someone's arm.
Each time, each time.

Sunday, February 18, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: god,mechanic,metamorphose
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 18 February 2018

A very nice poem with superb refrain, lyrical and poetic. Real fine to read, . Thumbs up. Pleez do review /comment my latest poem too, titled, a song for lunar lovers

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Takbeer Salati 19 February 2018

Thank You Zaynab. It would be my pleasure :)

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Dr Antony Theodore 18 February 2018

Showers of Tears Guilt capturing rose water Purifying my soul Not giving me a chance to commit sin Once more A fine poem of love, guilt, padon, remorse and a prayer to. Thank u Very much dear poet. Love this poem. tony

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Takbeer Salati 19 February 2018

Thank You so much Tony.

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Srinagar, Kashmir
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